碧落……黄泉 发表于 2022-9-2 16:12   全显示 1楼
想不到居然有续写完，不过感觉完结得有些草率，其实我认为这完全可以扩展成长篇来写的，例如女侠在被调教一段时间后捉住机会进行反杀，但是身体却留下一些弱点，之后在行侠仗义时被人发现弱点打败，再次败北调教等等这些
其实我觉得如果写成女侠因为某些原因然后被抓调教，但是又因为坚韧的性格最后找到机会逃脱反杀会比较有意思吧
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  • 逍遥夢 金币 +7 认真回复，奖励！ 2022-9-2 18:34
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